We did work like always but there was a guy called MR R he called to the big hall
Then he shout at us i was so scared. He called up benny and Charles
They had to sing it was horrible. So after he screamed at them and said they did horrible.
I was hiding behind jessie then he called her up she sang so beautifully then i had to sing
I was shaking staring at his weird head and very round face and his clothes everything he was waring was brown. i could not sing i was so terrified i wanted to cry. I was shaking so much i think she could feel me shaking. My mouth was ice it could not move . Then he called as the blind and the deff I wanted to scream at him and punch him but he was so scary i could no
I felt like i was gonna faint but i was so nervous i just froze i could not blink my heartbeat was going so fast. i kept of thinking about MR R shout saying mean words at me i want to kill myself I thought he was wright be. I new he was wrong because he is a bad man. I wished that soon i can leave the room.
After him shouting at us he started at me i relly want to leave the school and just do homework at
home . But i had a-lot of friends at school so i knew i could not leave. I had so much friends their I also relly wanted to cry because he gave me a heart attack we were still in the room with him glaring at me. I think he was still insulting us but i was daydreaming think of how mean and scary man he was.
I was still shaking and shaking he was like a lion that had very sharp teeth and blood dripping down i was terrified my in sides were screaming so loud. I even nearly scream out loud he was so
Bad I thought he was a robber trying to make us be upset and fell like we a nothing. if he was then it totally worked thats how i felt in side.
Like nothing a useless person that was dead inside cause of a mean rude person i hated MR R he was horrible man i am pretty sure that Jessie liked him only cause he liked her singing.
This was most of what I felt like i was scared terrified dead screaming want to be mean and die
Thats how he was like.
I relly wish i was not born then i was thinking what would my life be like with out him
Probably very good and amazing i could of been the queen but no i was
In a big hall terrified to death with horrible man in weird clothes and was so mean, rude
Horrible man.
I thought he was a mean pig cause pigs are normally fat like him well he was fat with mean words i would never ever ever ever ever want him to come back again i cant believe the government ever let him do this for a job it is horrible.
He was still glaring at me like he know what i am writing about i think if you are reading this
You should be happy you are in another school cause my school is horrible cause they let
This man come and look and be mean and rude to us it is horrible I thought then he said
You deaf and blind again i was so scary i want to just punch him in the nose so
Hard do he knows what i fell like wright now.
After he started at me for like forever he scream and said go go you untalented people
I ran out so happy that i am alive but we had to go again tomorrow so i was not looking forward to that but i had to go: thx for reading :
That was good
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