My simile poem by Amy jackson

This term we learnt about similes. A simile helps you to compare something to something else using "like" or "as". This simile poem is very important for me because I am talking about Shadow, he's a horse.

I woke up and did what I always do. I try get out the bed without waking everyone up. I make breakfast but always get wet because we have a wood roof that isn’t very stable. We make the same meals every morning because we don’t have a lot of money. I get dressed and pack my snack. I walk outside and try not touch the trash because I don’t want to get sick.

I got to school and went into class. I sat in front next to my two best friends .I always put up my hand but the teacher never answers my questions because there are about 90 people in my class. I wish there were more classes so there can be 24 in a class. I would really like some of the teachers to be kinder to us.

I got home cold with no food. My dad died two years ago and my mom was very depressed because she thought she could not do anything without him.

She became an alcoholic because of it. My big sister bullies me because she was brought up wrong and didn’t get enough education when she was at school.I wish I could go home to someone making me something to eat and a sister would love me.

I went outside again and saw the litter and trash everywhere and I would like it very much if  people would pick it up and we could have a clean environment. I wish that my school would have less children, my mom was not a alcoholic and my sister did not bullied me and my dad was still alive.

My mom made supper it is always a sandwich. I always have to go to bed first cause apparently I am the youngest so ya that's unfair so that's my life in a informal settlement hope you enjoyed reading it bye .

The Singing inspector

We did work like always but there was a guy called MR R he called to the big hall 

Then he shout at us i was so scared. He  called up benny and Charles 

They had to sing it was horrible. So after he screamed at them and said they did horrible.

I was hiding behind jessie then he called her up she sang so beautifully then i had to sing 

I was shaking staring at his weird head and very round face and his clothes everything he was waring was brown.  i could not sing i was so terrified i wanted to cry. I was shaking so much i think she could feel me shaking. My  mouth was ice it could not move . Then he called as the blind and the deff I wanted to scream at him and punch him but he was so scary i could no

I felt like i was gonna faint but i was so nervous i just froze i could not blink my heartbeat was going so fast.  i kept of thinking about MR R shout saying mean words at me i want to kill myself I thought he was wright be. I new he was wrong because he is a bad man. I wished that soon i can leave the room. 

After him shouting at us he started at me i relly want to leave the school and just do homework at 

home . But i had a-lot of friends at school so i knew i could not leave. I had so much friends their I also relly wanted to cry because he gave me a heart attack we were still in the room with him glaring at me. I think he was still insulting us but i was daydreaming think of how mean and scary man he was.

I was still shaking and shaking he was like a lion that had very sharp teeth and blood dripping down i was terrified my in sides were screaming so loud. I even nearly scream out loud he was so 

Bad I thought he was a robber trying to make us be upset and fell like we a nothing.  if he was then it totally worked thats how i felt in side. 

Like nothing a useless person that was dead inside cause of a mean rude person i hated MR R he was horrible man i am pretty sure that Jessie liked him only cause he liked her singing. 

This was most of what I felt like i was scared terrified dead screaming want to be mean and die 

Thats how he was like.

I relly wish i was not born then i was thinking what would my life be like with out him

Probably very good and amazing i could of been the queen but no i was 

In a big hall terrified to death with horrible man in weird clothes and was so mean, rude 

Horrible man.

I thought he was a mean pig cause pigs are normally fat like him well he was fat with mean words i would never ever ever ever ever want him to come back again i cant believe the government ever let him do this for a job it is horrible.

He was still glaring at me like he know what i am writing about i think if you are reading this 

You should be happy you are in another school cause my school is horrible cause they let

This man come and look and be mean and rude to us it is horrible I thought then he said 

You deaf and blind again i was so scary i want to just punch him in the nose so 

Hard do he knows what i fell like wright now.  

After he started at me for like forever he scream and said go go you untalented people 

I ran out so happy that i am alive but we had to go again tomorrow so i was not looking forward to that but i had to go: thx for reading :

The Grade 4 Camp

2  Week ago we were on camp we went to grafe house and sore some animals and we sore king juling doing tricks after we went on the real camp so we got here we sore the other two classes and waved good bye to them we all went to our dorms and settled in and we herd there was a fort me and isabell and Shannon and kate and lemeez we all had a swim in the pool  we all sat in the dorms for a bit the people were lise and me and raphi and jessica we sat and talked  the next day we played lots of games and were finishing our  fort  bilding  we did it for a long time me and raphi were looking for wood and leaves to  use for the fort   we had a we had a  swim in the pool and swam a lot and talk and played  and played  more games and red  books for a bit and  i loved the mod slight the was fun and i loved the games thre was a lot the night hike  was so fun even when i fell it was still fun and the food was so good i love it so so so so good it was the best it was so yummy and the next day was sad we had to go home but we found out wich fort was the best we came third and when we had a fire and did a talint show jessica and i came third it was the best camp ever and then we went back on the bus me and jessica were sleeping haha and we all went homev the end 😓😔